I really like your series, and several of your individual photos. I think your theme is clearly shown, and the sequence of images makes sense. I would probably recommed removing a couple of pictures though, as there is some repitition, and sometime "less is more". For instance, I don't think you need both the 2nd and 4th shot. They appear to be showing something quite similar, and visually I think the #4 is fantastic, rendering #2 unnecessary. I'm also a little confused by Photo #1. As it's the only image without the woman, it seems like a "before" shot initially, except that when you reach the end, there is no "after shot". I just don't completely get it's purpose. Photos #7 and #8 are also very similar and proibably not both necessary. I think #8 is the more visually interesting of the two. In addition to photo #4, I really like #3, #5 and #6. All really great images, great job!
Hi Jeff,
ReplyDeleteI really like your series, and several of your individual photos. I think your theme is clearly shown, and the sequence of images makes sense. I would probably recommed removing a couple of pictures though, as there is some repitition, and sometime "less is more". For instance, I don't think you need both the 2nd and 4th shot. They appear to be showing something quite similar, and visually I think the #4 is fantastic, rendering #2 unnecessary. I'm also a little confused by Photo #1. As it's the only image without the woman, it seems like a "before" shot initially, except that when you reach the end, there is no "after shot". I just don't completely get it's purpose. Photos #7 and #8 are also very similar and proibably not both necessary. I think #8 is the more visually interesting of the two. In addition to photo #4, I really like #3, #5 and #6. All really great images, great job!