Overall: Everything in these images should be in sharp focus! What happened?? Top image: Good POV! The perspective creates depth. The parallel elements move from farther apart in the front to closer together, creating movement from front to back. The diagonal line breaks up the space into a larger & smaller area. These contrasting proportions create the asymmetrical composition. The darker area on the bottom right looks tentative. It's not there enough to be part of the composition. So, add more or delete it. This images really needs to be focused. Use high apertures.
I really liked the concepts and creativity of all the images. Especially the 4th picture as the focus was on the circle and created a good contrast with the brick wall without a distraction from the subject. The bottom of that picture is a bit blurry but it can be fixed.
Overall: Everything in these images should be in sharp focus!
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Top image: Good POV! The perspective creates depth. The parallel elements move from farther apart in the front to closer together, creating movement from front to back. The diagonal line breaks up the space into a larger & smaller area. These contrasting proportions create the asymmetrical composition.
The darker area on the bottom right looks tentative. It's not there enough to be part of the composition. So, add more or delete it. This images really needs to be focused. Use high apertures.
I really liked the concepts and creativity of all the images. Especially the 4th picture as the focus was on the circle and created a good contrast with the brick wall without a distraction from the subject. The bottom of that picture is a bit blurry but it can be fixed.
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